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It wasn't until I'd failed
the Rorschach test that
I first became worried.

Chaotic blots that encompass
every fear of failure,
every hidden infant
born of words unspoken
between us.

There are always bloodcurdling moments
the neighbors never know the supernova
held hostage in the next room.

I did everything they asked me to do,
I can smile now, right?

Please, can I smile?
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There's not a whole lot to say, I liked the absurdity of failing an ink blot test :P

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How do you fail an ink blot test? I mean, there's no right or wrong answers. But I like this poem.

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Your journal sewn with pony hair and claws...
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Oh, also, I took the ink blot test before, and the picture featured looked like a scarab to me then, and does now.

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Your journal sewn with pony hair and claws...
:iconmistakenmagic:
Very chilling end! I'm seeing some sort of evil penguin in a gas mask...do I fail too?

Erin xxx

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A man discovered fire - but a woman discovered how to play with it.
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Very nice c: I love the last line a lot ^^ Failing an inkblot test, interesting, xD When I read the first line 'Flowers for Algernon' came into my head xD

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You are my evil angel~ :heart:
:iconliluthofthevalley:
You can't fail an inkblot test! Right? I lied like hell on mine. If I told them what I really saw I'd still be locked up!

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Down in the belly of the beast I lie.
All I save is my
PAIN.


Belly of the Beast (Danzig)
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every hidden infant
born of words unspoken
between us.


:clap: fucking brilliant, dear :heart:
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Thanks you dear...so sorry for the delay, it's been INSANE around these here parts...:( I've made sure to keep all your pieces so I can go over them, when I hit about 100 I just generally get rid of the deviations I don't have time for, generally keep yours and a couple other people's works though...

--
Andrew Hussey

"For a sorcerer, reality, or the world we all know, is only a description that has been pounded into you from the moment you were born."

-Carlos Castaneda
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Nah, the're just interpretational things...they're just random shapes that we fill in with our minds.

--
Andrew Hussey

"For a sorcerer, reality, or the world we all know, is only a description that has been pounded into you from the moment you were born."

-Carlos Castaneda
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You don't :P I used that mainly as a sort of absurdity...contradictory lines to convey sort of a confusion. Though if anyone could fail an ink blot test, it'd be me :P

--
Andrew Hussey

"For a sorcerer, reality, or the world we all know, is only a description that has been pounded into you from the moment you were born."

-Carlos Castaneda

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