The current I'd created here
is ever a concealed farce,
an irony incarnate
formed to draw out the
poison I can't live without.
I remember the dancing,
blistered smiles atop
chapped spirits,
masks to veil
the darkness her
warm steps belie.
I remember laughing,
parallel tears to the
fire I soar into praying
to feel the memories
there.
this womb is hallowed,
bittersweet home
to elicit the birth
of fear.
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Was going to use the birth of death in the final stanza, I like the idea of the womb, an aspect of the woman which creates life birthing it's antithesis...in practice it sounded a bit forced so I used fear instead which conveys a similar mood. Hope you like, image is from [link]
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 Ooo very interesting- I love it ^^
-- You are my evil angel~   That last stanza is good...Great imagery and yeah fear works well.
-- Jeremiah Jericho: Allowance [link] Thanks
 -- Andrew Hussey "For a sorcerer, reality, or the world we all know, is only a description that has been pounded into you from the moment you were born." -Carlos Castaneda Yeah, I went back and forth on that one...thanks for the read...
-- Andrew Hussey "For a sorcerer, reality, or the world we all know, is only a description that has been pounded into you from the moment you were born." -Carlos Castaneda Welcome
 I understand back and forth with certain ways to word things. ha. It can get nerve-racking or really fun. -- Jeremiah Jericho: Allowance [link] No problem ^^
-- You are my evil angel~  Love the last stanza I've used quite a lot of womb imagery over the years so that really appelaed to me
 Erin xxx -- A man discovered fire - but a woman discovered how to play with it.  an irony incarnate
formed to draw out the poison I can't live without delicious I'm a close friend of Irony...I think most of us that lok a little too deeply are...
thanks for the read-- Andrew Hussey "For a sorcerer, reality, or the world we all know, is only a description that has been pounded into you from the moment you were born." -Carlos Castaneda |
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