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The pressure you build there,
aortic tenacity, testament to
the world housed there.

Halogen moments, when we had
a home in each other, an
abode to the assurances I held
and the way the fire ignited in
you

My frostbitten warmth,
spider-web facets along
the twilight in your bediamonded
flame

this blood was always ours,
singular crimson abodes.

When I was together, there,
when your finger brushed mine,
it was then I was a child...
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image is from [link] yeah...anyone ever hear of the phoenix? Marvelous legends...

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'Halogen moments, when we had
a home in each other, an
abode to the assurances I held
and the way the fire ignited in
you'

Just love this stanza! A beautiful poem, well done!

Erin xxx

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A man discovered fire - but a woman discovered how to play with it.
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Thank-you...it'd been a bit since I posted...I'm glad it was something you lked...suprisingly, I liked that stanza myself, and I'm generally not one to like my on stuff... :) and thank-you deelply for the fav...

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Andrew Hussey

"For a sorcerer, reality, or the world we all know, is only a description that has been pounded into you from the moment you were born."

-Carlos Castaneda
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Very beautiful ^w^

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You are my evil angel~ :heart:
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you have a gift for beautiful language and meaning :heart: i loved this :heart: (is a sucker for romanticism)
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Thank you :)

--
Andrew Hussey

"For a sorcerer, reality, or the world we all know, is only a description that has been pounded into you from the moment you were born."

-Carlos Castaneda
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Me too...it's funny, I'm a cynicist bastard, but love romance in it's truest form...sort of a dichotomy...thank you for the :+fav: and the comment :)

--
Andrew Hussey

"For a sorcerer, reality, or the world we all know, is only a description that has been pounded into you from the moment you were born."

-Carlos Castaneda
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No problem :3

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You are my evil angel~ :heart:

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